TAINTED LOVE

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TAINTED LOVE

it feels like my heart
is sitting in the fires of hell
burning and screaming
to be free
from the pain and hurt
that you cause it
i now know
you are the devil in disguise
put on your pretty boy charm
trick me into thinking
you was the one
but it was your plan all along
to burn my heart
with your tainted love



just a lil something i just came up with i know its short but i hope you enjoy its kind of my freestyle lol


WRITTEN BY:TORIET

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blackfootlady commented on TAINTED LOVE

12-11-2009

it would not let me in to vote.hold on while i type 50 more letters lol

blackfootlady commented on TAINTED LOVE

12-11-2009

Hello Cottonluv,I haven't seen you for a few.EXCELLENT short write !I loved it,tc.Churv

redbloodink commented on TAINTED LOVE

12-11-2009

Some times few words say more then many.... I just simply enjoyed it.... Red

SILKYTWEED commented on TAINTED LOVE

12-09-2009

Excellent Write....short but fully deep in reaching and touching poetically....Thanks for sharing!

cliftondurant commented on TAINTED LOVE

11-19-2009

the good thing about it is that you find out in time pick up the peices and move on thanks for sharing

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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