Broken

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    Broken

    i only wish that you could see
    this pain you cause deep inside of me
    i wish i could tell you how i feel
    but you would neve beleive its real
    you dont see how much i hurt
    you only seem to know how to make it worse

    ill be ok,after a bit
    but i need to realize you dont fit
    you cheat and lie,and still i wait
    to see if you can change

    ill never love anyone,the way i loved you
    but i need someone to my heart will be true
    maybe one day you will grow up and be a man
    but until then friends not lovers is where
    our relationship stands

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    Kaleidoscope commented on Broken

    10-06-2009

    Show him this poem it says it all but, I believe you are worth more then he can give..That is the impression I get..Yes we all go through this pain and out of all the earthly pain. This one pain is the biggest pain in the ass. Keep writing

    stormimartin commented on Broken

    12-15-2008

    Very nice, true emotions. I know we have all been there! Check out some of my writing you might like it. Kind of simaliar to yours!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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