BURN

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    BURN

    you ease my nerves

    and fill my appetite

    you inspire me to write

    i love how you burn

     

    you enlighten my night

    strengthen my eyesight

    by slanting my eyes tight

    as you slowly burn

     

    you numb my pain

    warm the blood in my veins

    keep my mind open framed

    as you continue to burn

     

    you fill my lungs with confidence

    this i proudly admit

    your a new habit that i cant kick

    please forever burn...

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    optimistic commented on BURN

    06-15-2009

    I really enjoyed this peace you really did your thing on this one it seems you really opened up to your true feeling. Great write
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    tsgirl commented on BURN

    06-04-2009

    well, well well!!!!!! Back in the day when I use to get high, then I could relate, but right the stuff you burn girl I hate. all and all still you got it going on. keep up the good work. oh and bye the way check out http://www.originalpoetry.com/On-The-Inside_4
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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