Burn

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    Burn

    Have I wasted seconds?
    Have I wasted the wetness of sight?

    Moving slowly,
    Slowly --
    From head to foot.

    Passion
    Heats the furnace,
    Sears the pulsing blood.

    There -- your lips.
    There -- your hands.

    What can fingertips teach
    But the sensation of
    Loneliness chased away?

    Have I wasted breath --

    There -- your calves.
    The breadth of your shoulders...

    What can scent teach
    But the relief of you
    Filling my lungs?

    Every moment before a moment wasted.

    The caress of heat,
    A slow, fervent burn
    Over....

    ...whelms...

    Aflame,

    I awake.

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    monkyntz commented on Burn

    09-13-2009

    very good so full of passion i could feel it my favorite part, "what can finger tips teach but the sensation of loneliness chased away. " that really grabs you.

    scrye commented on Burn

    05-31-2009

    I liked this one the best so far but want to read some more of your other work. Thanks for posting it. I can really relate to this poem. Again Thanks

    Jammin

    05/31/2009

    Thank you. I am also looking forward to your poetry. Please write more!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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