The Tragedy of My Shadow.

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Humor

    The Tragedy of My Shadow.

     Lightly the darkness I ring.
    Faintly visible --
    the outer darkness --
    To cast tenderness on the darkness within.

    When they speak,
    I soundlessly echo.

    I am movement,
    without consciousness.

    Lightly the darkness I ring...

    I am the butterfly's wings
    Unable to stop should I want to.

    I am your foot --
    Movement without thought.

    Shadow, shadow!

    I am neither strong nor smart
    Fluttering with the light

    But how you cannot cast me aside!

    For where you go, I am.

    And where you rest, I rest.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on The Tragedy of My Shadow.

    10-06-2010

    The way you put the words together in this one is exquisite. Great job!
    Reply to Comment

    Jammin

    10/07/2010

    Thank you for taking the time to read this humble poem. I look forward to reading your poetry! Jammin

    WordSlinger commented on The Tragedy of My Shadow.

    10-06-2010

    Great poem from start to finish, brilliant, thank you WS
    Reply to Comment

    Jammin

    10/07/2010

    I always love to hear compliments from WS. Thank you.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    Jammin’s Poems (49)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Suicide 0 06/20/2012
    Whale Song 0 04/01/2012
    Joyful 0 04/01/2012
    Goodbye My Love 0 12/18/2011
    Lost Voice 1 11/06/2011
    You Should Be Dead 1 11/06/2011
    Dancer 1 11/01/2011
    Kill or Be Kill 0 10/26/2011
    Sunset 2 10/18/2011
    Shooting Star 1 07/31/2011
    Corona 0 07/21/2011
    I am caught 0 03/11/2011
    I wet the page 1 01/22/2011
    Mother 1 12/24/2010
    She Was King 3 12/05/2010
    Merciless 2 12/04/2010
    For the Restless and the Lonely 1 10/27/2010
    That Love Comes 1 10/26/2010
    Envy 1 10/25/2010
    The Promise Of Love 1 10/22/2010
    The Fine Consumption Of Books 1 10/21/2010
    The Privacy of Ink 2 10/20/2010
    Warm Solitude 3 10/20/2010
    Falling Out Of Love 5 10/13/2010
    The Tragedy of My Shadow. 2 10/06/2010
    Shallow Deeds 3 09/27/2010
    Tears 4 09/16/2010
    Savannah Woman 2 09/11/2010
    Warden 4 09/10/2010
    Teacher 2 09/05/2010
    Vent 2 08/03/2010
    Succor 4 06/27/2010
    Slave 1 06/03/2010
    Amber 1 06/03/2010
    Prison 1 06/03/2010
    Broken 0 06/03/2010
    Reborn 1 04/15/2010
    Sneak 5 09/09/2009
    Breathe 2 08/20/2009
    Stumbled 0 08/06/2009
    Yearning 1 07/30/2009
    Water 2 07/14/2009
    Ruthless 1 05/31/2009
    Wretched 3 05/31/2009
    Sample 1 05/31/2009
    Moon 1 05/30/2009
    Loved 4 05/30/2009
    Burn 2 05/28/2009
    Rest 1 05/28/2009
    Top of Page