BUTTERFLIES

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    This is a song about everlasting love.

    BUTTERFLIES


    Do you remember the night that we danced

    That memory returns to me

    Love was so fleeting, we took a chance

    Promising how our love was to be
      

    Now we only dance in our dreams

    Our two hearts beating as one

    Time passes slowly, or so it seems

    Our love has only begun
     

    Dancing with you under the moonlight

    Stars were twinkling way up above

    Knowing that moment in our life was right

    The night that we fell in love
      

    Butterflies  come at the sound of your voice

    I cherish each moment with you

    So now I leave you no choice

    To pledge that your love is true

     

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    Teardrops commented on BUTTERFLIES

    08-26-2010

    I love butterflies and this poem well written and great flow thanks for the read Marie
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    barefootmama

    09/02/2010

    Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked the poem. I was speaking of "butterflies" - 'nerves', when you love someone so much, especially your 'mate'. The poem is a song, also.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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