Butterflies

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    I made this poem for the love of my life, the light in my darkest days, and the one my heart beats for daily!! He knows who he is!!

    Butterflies

    The Butterfly Effect By: Danielle Nicholas aka Niceliece

       

    Suddenly there was a man, who came into my life

    when I saw him, I already knew, I wanted to be his wife

    I've never been so comfortable, and so sure about someone

    Until I looked into his eyes, and saw that my suffering was done

    He kissed every open wound, and gently rubbed every scar

    He whispered to me so softly "I want you to know exactly who u are"

    He told me I was his sweet pea, his lover and his friend

    And I felt the same in return, his heart I wanted to win

    He had such a poetic vibe, as he begin to make love to me

    I was resurrected from all my pain, and I put my trust in thee

    I envisioned my future with him, as I could see myself with no other

    I wanted to be his soulmate,.. his friend, his wife, his lover

    He gave me no reasons to ever doubt his devotion

    He gave me no reasons to ever wallow in my emotions

    I just want him to remember what his love has meant to me

    And how I am drowning in solitude, because I need him to truly see

    Just how the changes are killing me, for his love can heal my pain

    For he is the brightest star in the night, and the shelter in the pouring rain

    I love him with all my heart and soul, For God knows my love is real

    And I pray that he'll remember, all the passion I made him feel

    This is my last surrender as I  try and revive your passion

    Trying to convince you that our love is the latest fashion

    It will stand the test of time, just hold my hand and hold it tight

    Never give up on our love, because I won't give up without a fight!

    You gave me butterflies, to last me the rest of my days

    And I know your loving me, will make everything ok.....so don't ever stop giving me....Butterflies

     

     

     

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    Sydney commented on Butterflies

    10-16-2010

    wow this is truely beautiful. you can never rate love like that... ever. Sydney

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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