Closureyes

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    Closureyes

     Close your eyes little buddy.
    Sleep away the night.
    Closure yes
    from a day that was happy and bright.

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    Papa commented on Closureyes

    04-16-2010

    "day is done. gone the sun" ? A day should end with a smile.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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