The wait

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    The wait

     At the end of the day
    I wait for love
    I wait for happiness
    I wait for you

    When I drive home from work
    I look for love
    I look for happiness
    I look for you

    Wait and look
    look and wait
    it seems
    its all I ever do

    At the end of the day
    when I am waiting for you
    I look for the love
    that I once knew

    When I drive home from work
    and I am looking for you
    I wait for the happiness
    between me and you

    Where are you
    when I sit here and wait
    are you looking for love
    are you out on a date

    my mind is racing
    my tears have been shed
    should I stop waiting for love
    should I move on instead

    wait and look
    and hope for you
    If I stop waiting
    what else can I do


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    SavVySam commented on The wait

    02-22-2010

    Another nice one jiminy! You have a neat knack for language and word usage! Well done!
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    EinStud commented on The wait

    02-15-2010

    You can leave, and wait on someone else? But then that doesn't solve the problem either, I guess. Of course you could go lesbian. Then you will have a partner who feels exactly like you do...
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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