Coaster

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    Letter to the people

    This right here is so deep stuff if you read it and analyze it youll be able to understand what im saying...again this is about my present life and the past but not to far bacc...well i hope u enjoy...   

    Coaster

    Standing in line waiting,not knowing what to expect.I quiver with fear as I approach the gate.I hear the screams of others,but i choose to ignore.The coaster comes back around.I think about the risk,but the seat conviences me im going to be safe.THe belt comes down and the ride begins.The coaster pulls out of the pit.My heart jumps and my adrinaline starts to run.A left turn then a right i'm still ok.Then comes the hill.My emotions begin to fly as the coaster starts to climb.The wheels and breaks collide.We reach the top and my feelings get deeper.the breaks release and the coaster flys. Down into the pit of control,up the loop of change.Through another loop of strength.Then it turns into the twist of confusion,then up the hill of secrets.My heart breaks never to return to it's norm.Turns and twist the ride comes to an end.I reach to get off and it begins again.I'm traped,stuck loving this coaster.

     

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