Dear, stranger

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    Letter to the people

       FOR ALL OF YOU WHO DONT KNOW ME ON THIS LEVEL I WROTE THIS TO MY FATHER A WHILE BACK. IT WAS MENT TO BE A GOODBYE LETTER, BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BE SOMETHING ELSE.SO I HOPE THIS HELPS YOU UNDERSTAND WHERE IVE COME FROM.THERE IS A PART TWO & IT WILL BE POSTED IN A LIL WHILE.& THERE'S ANOTHER FINAL POME THAT I WROTE TO MY FATHER THAT WILL BE POSTED A LILWHILE AFTER PART TWO.SO I HOPE YOU  WILL BE READY! 1 LOVE!P.S. Those of you who asked who Little bit is,that's my baby brother.He's now about 2years old & lives with his foster parents where every they maybe.But know that i will find him & bring him home.

    Dear, stranger

    DADDY?YOU DON'T DESERVE THA NAME. I SEE WHAT MY MOTHER THINKS OF YOU, & AS A MATTER OF FACT I'M STARTING TO FEEL THA SAME.YOUR HURT MY FEELINGS WHITE BOI,YOU'VE TIRN THEM ALL AWAY.YOUR NOT A MAN YOUR JUST A FAKE.YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE COMMING I WAS EVEN WHILLING TO RUN AWAY.TO LET GO OF MY HOPES & MY DREAMS TO BE WITH YOU.SEE I REALLY KNOW YOU NOW.I KNOW THAT YOU NOT WORTHY TO BE CALLED A MAN.DUDE I KNOW THAT WHEN HARD TIMES COME I CAN'T DEPEND ON YOU.OH YEA DAD YOU WANNA KNOW WHAT ELSE I KNOW?I KNOW YOU LOST SOMEONE REAL GOOD & HAD A BABY BY A HOE THAT LEFT YOU ALONE.BUT THAT'S ALRIGHT, WAIT NO IT ISN'T YOU MADE A PROMISE & YOU SAID YOU WOULD KEEP IT,BUT GUESS WHAT PAPI YOU DIDN'T.& I HATE YOU FOR IT!THAT WAS THE ONE PROMISE YOU MADE & DIDN'T KEEP.BUT HEY I CAN'T CHANGE THE PAST. BUT JUST KNOW THIS,LITTLE BIT IS GOING TO BE JUST FINE WITH ME I'M OING TO GIVE HIM THE OVE HE NEEDS & WHEN THE DAY COMES & HE ASKES ME "WHERES DADDY?' I'M GOING TO SAY "HE'S GONE HE'S NO LONGER IN EXSISTANCE."SO DAD YOU THINK YOU KNOW ME NOW?YOU DON'T!YOU'LL NEVA NO THA RAGE I HAVE FOR YOU B-CAU EACH DAY I FIND SOMETHING NEW & I'M GLAD GOD TOOK ME AWAY FROM YOU & I'M GLAD YOU AWAY FROM LITTLE BIT TOO!YOU KNOW WHAT I'M DONE WITH YOU, I'M THREW WITH YOU.BUT THIS WONT BE THE LAST TIME I WRITE TO YOU.SO GET READY FOR PART TWO!

     

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    SEVEN commented on Dear, stranger

    06-22-2009

    Whoa dead beat dads comes in all colors....For a min I thought it was black thang....Well I can't be that stoooopid...I feel ya gurlfriend...Not in the sense of father abandonment but in a sense that I know Alot of single mothers....Well keep on writing and let that "S.O.B" know how u feel, maybe one day he will man up.....I said maybe..

    Ireezy

    09/30/2009

    thnkz for the love

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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