coffee house couple

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    coffee house couple

    tall heeled blond haired gal
    skinny like a reed
    her companion chocolate brown
    sleeping mat lashed to his backpack

    probable scenarios race through one's mind.....

    this couple obviously a pair in love
    dovetailed at the coffee counter

    her one would suppose a fashion model
    attired so smart & right
    him ruppled & worn
    whispering to her while the thermos is filled

    they leave and head down the street
    to where?

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    Drivingczar commented on coffee house couple

    03-29-2009

    Visual verses! More please!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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