[Dangerously in love

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    [Dangerously in love

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    I’m not complete without you by my side. I can’t eat or sleep. Puppy love I refuse to believe it because this is the real thing. How dare people tell me I don’t know the meaning to my feelings? That this one is just a phase, and again I refuse to believe it. I see my future in your eyes which makes me be under the impression that your love is pure. I can’t call love life without you. Your love feels so good. It keeps me breathing. Like it was specifically made for me. Without you I can’t do it. Without your kisses your touch. I love. Love is pain because without you I’m nothing. You’re my water because without you I’m dry. You’re my oxygen because like I said you keep me breathing. Your my food my sun my energy. I love you and the way you love me. Im dangerously in love.

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    tammylamb commented on [Dangerously in love

    08-11-2009

    Keep writing I want to read more Lynesha3000. I love the passion and honesty in this poem. The images referencing vital needs like breathing, food, water. "are powerful and I see the "danger" if they aren't there. "I see the future in you eyes......" is beautiful and makes me consider all the loves that end up being in the future and the one's that don't, yet some how "love" in it's "pure" sense is a constant...I think I'm saying a "So, with you or without you, baby... you'll be there, my love..." Sorry this comment might not make sense... these eyes are tire and the mind is spacey.

    dx26 commented on [Dangerously in love

    03-20-2009

    very touching. love is really a strong thing and you are dealing with it well

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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