Tired

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    Tired


    Tired of being accused of something that I have not done. Minus the thought of time after time that I’ve tried to tell the truth and yet still I come out on the bottom when all the liars end up on top. Not caring about what people say but yet it still is hard to know that people look down in you because your word is meaningless. One lie that made a tragedy in my life. Yet people say forgive and forget does that philosophy exclude me? Because that’s what it seems to be that I am an outcast because of my giving off honest but taking in untrustworthy word. So what do I do continue to be an outcast or stand up for my word. I’m tired of fighting I’m tired of the masses there’s no more of me to give to these unopened hearts. I’m tired

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    Spacer commented on Tired

    01-29-2009

    One quick Pointer if you ever want to make these poems more serious and more effective to the reader...try centering the poems and expanding your vocab to be more descriptive..and display more emotion...GreaT STufff

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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