[The biggest mistake she ever made]

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    [The biggest mistake she ever made]



    She showed out not realizing at the end of the day that would really be standing by her side when she was down and out. People who didn’t even matter mattered then but now it makes no sense to her why her actions. Took place at the wrong time. She lied and the only reason why her true friends don’t believe her is because their full of resentment. All because she lied. To betray an act to fit in. you see it every day movies but real life really matters and now she doesn’t matter because she took that road the road of lies. The biggest mistake she ever could make. No longer will people go on and pretend like. She claims it was her past but once was told that her past is not to far from her future. There’s nothing left to do. After that tragic mistake

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    dx26 commented on [The biggest mistake she ever made]

    03-20-2009

    i agree with this guy. it is a nice poem and yes we are doing something more than watching television :)

    Spacer commented on [The biggest mistake she ever made]

    01-29-2009

    Kool nice to see other young ppl on this website...Just comes to show we all arn't all glued to Tv's we write too...(= Nice poem by the way

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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