dear adam

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    one day me and my bro go in a fight and we were best friends but hes 7 years older than me so it was hard to work it out since im only 15 and hes 23 but we worked it out and i wrote this to him after and he cried with me cuz he felt so bad
    i love u big bro:)

    dear adam

     i cant take this crap anymore
    im sick of it
    i dont think i can handle it anymore
    i tell myself i dont miss you everyday  i dont miss you
    but i do miss you
    i miss you so much
    you were my everything & i messed up
    this is my im sorry
    please tell me you will come back
    please love me again
    and
    now that you forgave me
    please dont ever leave me again <3

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    scrye commented on dear adam

    06-30-2009

    This was beautifully written for beautiful intentions. I absolutely loved it. Keep it up. You make me envious for I have a brother whom I long to be close to but alas will never happen.
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    ilymanny

    07/13/2009

    yeah hes my best friend now and dont give up just be there and let him know you care eventually it will work i have gone from him hateing me trying to kill me to being his best friend it took alot but we made it through

    soulwriter commented on dear adam

    06-21-2009

    Ah, so young an so passionate - God willing and many years of blessed experiences you will never lose the quest to find your hearts truest desires with the perfect soul who too is out there now looking for you. Loving and losing is not a game, though there are times that we must lose to later gain! Keep creating!
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    ilymanny

    06/21/2009

    i love passion it makes me feel complete :) and yeah i was on a quest to find thhat someone but that quest ended 1 year and 8 months ago i found the most amazing guy and hes everything to me most of my poems were wrote before i met him but some of my poemsare about him im in the process of writing more thank you for the advice and compliments

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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