Because of you

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    Because of you

     cant you see you hurt me
    im dieing your suffocating me
    my tears soak my face & blood stains my arm
    puddles of blood on the bathroom floor  all around me
    i did this for love because of you
    you shattered my heart and you sold my soul
    you held my fate in your arms and you let me go
    you threw me on the floor & that's where i lay now
    my love for you rushing out of my arms and legs to get over you
    my body now trembling im scared now
    my breathing shallow because i don't want you to see me suffer
    im dead now and its all because of you

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    soulwriter commented on Because of you

    06-22-2009

    It all because... oh how we love, we suffer, we renew, we bloom and we conquer. The strong survive, and the survivors grow stronger by loving others who are too weak to go it alone. Beautifully revealing in a self reflective revelation of truth. So much more heightening knowing that there is no sad ending, that you have discovered new beginnings. Write on writer on!
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    wheelsal commented on Because of you

    06-20-2009

    Tell me this is just a poem and you are alright. Your are beautiful and have a way with words keep writing.
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    ilymanny

    06/21/2009

    well it happend to me but im a new person now and i live for the future and not the past

    Chaos128 commented on Because of you

    06-20-2009

    This sent a true chill down my spine, ilymanny. I hope, sincerely, that you are safe and well. Please never doubt that are always those who would spare no effort or prayer to help you keep so.
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    ilymanny

    06/21/2009

    i am safe and well now i wasnt when i wrote this but i got out how i felt and it made me stop thinking other thoghts i have changed into a new person because of those pople they made me realize i had to be tough in this world but also the people i love now have made me live in the future and not the past thank you for the comment

    jademelissa74 commented on Because of you

    06-19-2009

    There is so much pain, confusion, hate and anger that his poem reflects. I am so concerned now that this is not just a poem. You have such a lovely face! You remind me of my baby girl!
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    UnworthyFather commented on Because of you

    06-19-2009

    A very dark poem. There are two venues that this takes me down... Suicide, and rape by a relative. If this account is true, and you need a friend, you may contact me at any time. If it is not true, you have very well related to the feelings of rape and suicide. Great write. Thanks for sharing, and I am here if you need someone to talk to. Marcus
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