my whole world

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    my whole world

    he came into my life ever so quickly
    & ever so sweetly
    when i first saw him my heart sank
    when we first spoke i fell in love
    when we touched i felt nothing could go wrong
    when we first kissed i knew it was forever
    i love him so much and i couldnt ask for anyone better
    thats how he came into my life ever so quickly
    and ever so sweetly

    i love u manny

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    Chaos128 commented on my whole world

    06-19-2009

    A direct declaration and one that would be impossoble to ignore. You have a unique voice, Ilymanny. I'm sure Manny knows it,too.

    UnworthyFather commented on my whole world

    06-19-2009

    A great poem that conveys the love you feel for your 'soulmate'. May God ever bless your relationship with him. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

    UnworthyFather

    06/19/2009

    It just dawned on me...ilymanny (I love you Manny)!!!

    ilymanny

    06/19/2009

    yes we have a very strong love and hes so amaing i couldnt ask for anyone else

    ilymanny

    06/19/2009

    yeah thats what it means lol silly

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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