Death

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    Death

    Something so cold,
    Something so wrong,
    Something so hard to let go of,
    Something people are not ready for,
    Something so crazy for them, but at the sametime so right for us the ones that are doing it to ourselfs,
    Wishing I cold feel the same things that they feel,
    See the same things that they see,
    Hearing the same things that they hear,
    Loveing the same way they love,
    Careing the same way they care,
    Something so scary but yet so calming,
    Shareing the same thoughs and ideas,
    Do you feel pain,
    Do u feel anything?

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    gothicsueaside commented on Death

    03-25-2009

    i love it just like i love all of your work so fare please keep it coming i would love to read more

    origionalmerlin commented on Death

    03-23-2009

    thantos... well written . thank you for posting this

    brandon commented on Death

    03-12-2009

    omg i know exactly what you mean

    outawhackjack commented on Death

    03-12-2009

    very nice write

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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