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    As we sit here I turn away afrade,
    That you are about to see the tears
    That are forming in my eyes
    You ask if anythings wrong
    I smile and tell you that i am fine
    The truth is if i went for your hand
    Would you hold mine?
    If I went for your lips,
    Would you kiss me?
    If I went for you heart,
    Would you love me too?

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    Wakeitha commented on Question

    07-25-2009

    Wow! Beautiful its like you felt what I felt and was thinking the same words.Excellent writting and words I love your written.

    origionalmerlin commented on Question

    03-23-2009

    a light touch, well done

    jeffloving commented on Question

    03-16-2009

    hey...this lovely...nd seems u r talking to me directly .lol.i love it cos its direct and so easy to grasp...keep it up sweetie...

    gothicsueaside commented on Question

    03-10-2009

    i hope to see more work from you i would love to read more you are very talented

    gothicsueaside commented on Question

    03-09-2009

    wow i am lost for words

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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