DeSPUHrate UHhh-TRactiON

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    DeSPUHrate UHhh-TRactiON

    WELL what do ya know! Here I am AGAIN pacing up and down the concrete, looking for something I dropped on the way to depression avenue.
    NOOOOO it wasn't money that I dropped, it was my sense of self-value.
    LOOK THERE IT IZZZZZZ!
    No, wait, that wasn't it, that was just a can of false confidence.
    I'm shocked at this. How did I manage to become so desperate?
    A beautiful girl with enough intelligence to know to put two & two together, just throws all common sense out of he window because she feels like a piece of old silver in a diamond mine......WORTHLESS.

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    cmlestrade commented on DeSPUHrate UHhh-TRactiON

    07-27-2009

    Great writing. Lots of pent up emotions being vented .I think a lot of us have been there.

    Bwyn commented on DeSPUHrate UHhh-TRactiON

    04-29-2009

    Wo... Man we have all been there promise!

    writerspassion commented on DeSPUHrate UHhh-TRactiON

    01-23-2009

    Felt the pain in this one. Keep your head up

    bforibus commented on DeSPUHrate UHhh-TRactiON

    01-22-2009

    this is a great poem. while u reading it. it feels like im this person desperately searching for something loking down and everything very good write

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    MelloMarieC’s Poems (8)

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    SENSE*LESS 1
    Denials of denied daughter 7
    And you've become... 6
    DeSPUHrate UHhh-TRactiON 4
    Just enough to like you 5
    NICOTINE 6
    Maybe 2
    Four Letter Word 5