And you've become...

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    And you've become...

    You were the reason I started my day with a smile.
    I was on the local train, and you were running EXPRESSSS on my mind.
    Like wind chimes, you BLEWW me AWAYYYY aaaahhh...
    there you were without a warning, NO SIGN.
    Didn't expect for love to come in MYYY direction.
    Instead of asking for directions, you hitch-hiked your way into my heart
    that's why it BEATS FASTER by the second. You truly are a blessing.
    Not to mention, I doubt that was your intentions,
    but I guess you'll never know what's cooking until you go in the kitchen.
    I'm so fond of you, and I honor you.
    I know your flaws but I'm still DRAWN to you.
    You make me dream awake, and how a LOOONG for a taste of whatever awaits.
    You care for my heart that easily breaks, my silence is broken...
    AND LOVING YOU IS GRREAAAT!

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    nangy commented on And you've become...

    07-29-2009

    Nice, very nice, reminds me when i first fell in you-know-what..irresistably drawn to him even tho i know i will get burned..love the line of "you hictc-hiked your way into my heart"...keep it up

    MelloMarieC

    01/05/2010

    nangy..thanks so much for the comment..ur sweet! and yess...love is dangerous but beautiful at the same time

    poetress77 commented on And you've become...

    07-20-2009

    Props to you, this was a good write. I like the line "You make me dream awake", I heard that, peace

    majestic commented on And you've become...

    02-17-2009

    Nice poem young sista. Keep them coming. Very intriguing and I am from uptop too. Just hanging out in the Bama until I revap my position in life, and start a direction. Never too old... ONE

    bforibus commented on And you've become...

    01-25-2009

    WOW! a brick in the face. this sunday morning i might have to bring the love back out and put the pain back in. thank you

    writerspassion commented on And you've become...

    01-23-2009

    Great work. I just found a girl that makes me feel this way

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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