Just enough to like you

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    Just enough to like you

    It was nice to have met your acquaintance,
    even though it was well past due.
    Corny but true, it feels like forever I've known you.
    Something about your presence takes me back to my childhood.
    A burst of excitement that puts me in a good mood.
    You walk into a room and I'm captured by your subtle attraction,
    which could be fatal if I'm moved to action.
    I don't want to put you in an awkward position by making mention that
    this crush is non-fiction. To bring it to your attention could damper our
    friendship. And that one thing I'm not trying to risk.
    Sometimes you make me sick, but I honestly
    could see us in a relationship.
    Pardon my straightforwardness.
    By any chance, would you happen to be interested?
    I don't know much about you...
    but I know Just enough to say that I like you.


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    Crush commented on Just enough to like you

    07-07-2009

    i am floored by how adorable this is. not to be offensive, i think this is sweet, cute and it takes me back to a crush i had when i was younger. i love this ! there is a realness in the way you express your emotions that is irresistable. thank u !

    MelloMarieC

    08/21/2009

    thanks for the feedback hun! I appreciate it ^_^

    writerspassion commented on Just enough to like you

    01-23-2009

    Gotta take a chance and let em know or you'll never know yourself

    Bwyn commented on Just enough to like you

    01-23-2009

    This poem is soooo cute:)

    bforibus commented on Just enough to like you

    01-22-2009

    this sounds like a conversation i had one day. or one that was presented to me by a best friend very good write. very good

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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