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This is an older one from my other blogsite

Discover

If I were an artist
I would paint how I feel
in the most vibrant colors
that make love real
If I were a dancer
I would only dance with you
If I were a speaker
I swear I would only tell whats true
But if I could be anything
I would just be with you
I don't want to go searching
in mines for gold
just to be yours to have and to hold
All my life I guess I searched
and only found mysteries
that led me to mazes ending in misery
If I were poet
I would write you a song
and if you were choosing
pray that mine was the one
if I were from the Ivy League
I would represent you
and pray my every move was true
but if I could be anyone
it would the one thats close to you
If I were endowed with talent
would it amuse you
If I were of unknown beauty
would I mesmerize you
If I were intelligent beyond comprehension
could you then see children
but if I could be anyone
it would be to be the only one
Yes if I were only a woman
and that is all I claimed to be
would you wait for me to dance for you
or would you come and look for me
if I were only a woman
and that was my only claim
would you need something more divine
or would you want to know my name
Because babe I'm just a woman
and I have many dreams
I just wondered
for once
would someone discover me

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ladydanie commented on Discover

04-12-2010

@Marsink-thanks,this poem is about a woman who is speculated upon from men. "If I were...would you want me then" basically.

Marsink commented on Discover

04-11-2010

Know the questions to ask, and the answers that matter will be yours to make that wise decision. (By one other poem I read, Heart of David, you must be an individual of faith or why ask why concerning David) As a child of the King, seek His design for your life and pray for the strength to be obedient to that calling: I sense that's the line for peace of mind in this sensitive and stirring read of emotion. Thank you for sharing!

patriciaann commented on Discover

03-28-2010

OHhh.. A great Poem for love.. :D Sometimes I felt the same things too.. You know, when you look all around you, You'll see everyone are in pairs.. but you.. Why you don't have any, like what the other people have.. :(

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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