Too Much

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    Another older poem from last year...but some things dont change that much

    Too Much

     I wish I were like rain
    I would nourish the drought
    I wish I were like water
    strong but soft
    smoothing around the edges
    and not to harsh sometimes
    it seems the only time I'm caring
    is when I write these lines
    I spent my life in someone elses skin
    breaking free I dont return
    somehow I travel
    but I never learn
    I'm to harsh when I speak
    and to quiet when I don't
    I anger myself for the things I do
    and fear myself for the things I don't
    I'm to friendly
    but I'm to mean
    I'm so caring
    but the most hateful thing you've ever seen
    I wish I were more graceful
    more calm and subdued
    but even if I were
    that would be too much too
    someone give me a smoke
    someone just leave me alone
    im just so tired of talkin
    Im just so sick of bein grown
    takin care of myself fine
    even though I'm here
    and if I stop and think about it
    well then there is too much fear
    well where is my damn hero
    did I scare him away
    nobody wants to rescue me
    at least not this way
    I'm to much to pay for
    and to much to save
    I'm too much when I'm careful
    I'm to much when I misbehave
    I wish I could be quiet
    but then what the use
    whats wrong? are you tired?
    thats too much too

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    patriciaann commented on Too Much

    03-28-2010

    I like this Poem Danie.. I think, I can feel what you are trying to tell on this Poem..
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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