Pretend the life

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    Pretend the life

     I dont want sympathy
    but understanding
    well it would be so freeing
    I dont want a look of concern
    but if you'd hold me
    maybe you would learn
    that my emotions go deeper
    then this look on my face
    my pain is so much wider
    than all this empty space
    and for once I know how it feels
    to color outside the lines
    life is never easy
    especially yours and mine
    I wonder which is the bigger deception
    to pretend the life
    or to let the truth hide

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    Marsink commented on Pretend the life

    04-11-2010

    Very philosophically spiritual, (or, should I say Godly)? A most important issue to tackle and face head-on! Walk the walk, or sit down, otherwise we just get in the way of that which is virtuous and lovely. Bravo!!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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