Elusive

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    Elusive


    You.

    You the crafter.

    You the writer of words.

    You kill with one verb.

    You seduce with another.

    You know, yet not.

    I am the prisoner unseen, unknown.

    I am the lover.

    You don't know.

    You have entranced me.

    You with your words.

    You with a pen.

    You with a paper.

    You with the thought.

    Me it reaches from miles away.

    Me it seduces.

    I the elusive.

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    pantleg commented on Elusive

    02-13-2009

    I liked it simple but revealingly elusive

    cottonluv commented on Elusive

    02-13-2009

    nice vixy.i like.good work

    NacolleMarie commented on Elusive

    02-13-2009

    awesome i love this

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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