Endjoy

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  • Jealousy

    Endjoy

    My mind strains trying
    To figure you out
    Dieing in my heart
    Frustrated anger

    I know you were never mine
    Just for a short while

    I couldn’t even enjoy
    You as you lay
    Naked in my bed
    You slept I never

    I’m just a nice guy
    Everyone’s big brother

    It hurts my brain when
    I see you with somebody else
    I gave you all I had
    You never gave me a chance

    I’m just a nice guy
    Everyone’s best friend

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    am2anangel commented on Endjoy

    05-28-2009

    I can really feel your frustration in this poem. Like, your tired of being the friend and brother figure and want someone to want you for something more than that. Very well written.

    lightcourier commented on Endjoy

    05-09-2009

    poignant. Good work! Thanks!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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