enlightened
In my minds eye I sea,
my body floating after me..
by Kage no Kitsune
my body floating after me..
by Kage no Kitsune
enlightened
4 Comments
Tags: Philosophy
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BringMeBullets commented on enlightened
04-14-2010
- WOW-- This is wild. I love the images that flow through my head in these few single words that you have written. Your words are those of a god. Thank you for sharing!
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Chaos128 commented on enlightened
09-28-2009
- Very metaphysical, Kage, and very sharp. I'd write more but i don't think the comment should be longer than the poem ha ha.
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knight4696 commented on enlightened
09-27-2009
- Concise and yet ......beautifully stated. Good Job!
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trocka7 commented on enlightened
07-27-2009
- Simple perfection................................beautiful!
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