ENLIGHTMENT OF A SOUL

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    Feel the feelings

    ENLIGHTMENT OF A SOUL



    With each page, turned in book, just read
    Feeling, that spiritually, soul been misled
    Emotions, feelings, dealt, expressed
    Lying still dormant, blocked, and suppressed


    Resentments of heart, years been caged
    Hidden, behind, guilt, denial, and rage
    Paralyzed fears, hurt, tangled  shame
    Letting go, need, release and to blame


    As one learns, to accentuate
    Increase, that power to create
     Lonliness felt, even numbed hate
     No longer valid reason, to hide, isolate


    Secret, to ones, personal success
    Eliminate indifference, doubt and distress 
    Answer be true, to self, to be blessed
    Living own joy, of lifes' happiness

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    suzystars commented on ENLIGHTMENT OF A SOUL

    07-25-2009

    So very true. Great poem. You will show many others a new way to look and act upon life. We need to let the things that bother us be confronted, with ourselves, so the true love behind them will rise to the occasion. I love reading your poems.

    MOMofTWINS commented on ENLIGHTMENT OF A SOUL

    07-17-2009

    What a very interesting and unique form that you have written this poem in. Deffinitly a new way to look at things. Well done.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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