WORDS FROM THE HEART

2 Comments

Poem Commentary

Be grateful for the little things!!

WORDS FROM THE HEART





We, all deserve, to hear
How special, we all, are
Words,expressed, from heart
Most appreciative, by far


May, not receive, a gift
Not remember, even card
Spoken, but from heart
Mere words, one  can't discard

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

dahlusion commented on WORDS FROM THE HEART

08-25-2010

"We, all deserve, to hear How special, we all, are"—yes we do and yes you are. bravo!! peace and light, dah

suzystars commented on WORDS FROM THE HEART

07-25-2009

Words from the heart I like that for a start. Go deeper with that thought so more can hear it Bring it from God and shout it thru spirit Good write but the picture I don't think fits. You are saying words from the heart mean more I think a picture showing some kind of heart would give the poem more of a beat. No pun intended. It did make me feel a gift that comes from inside is so much more meaningful than one you hold in the hand. I hope what I say offends no one because I comment what the poem does for ME as I read it. Thanks for being a friend and keep writing, maybe with one heart and a caring spirit we can change the world.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

Unknown Source

DESIRE2INSPIRE’s Poems (7)

Title Comments
Title Comments
KNOWING 2
WORDS FROM THE HEART 2
WHERE IS LOVE 2
HEARTS MAGIC 3
SEEK AND FIND 1
BE STILL 3
ENLIGHTMENT OF A SOUL 2