KNOWING
Out of the Blue
With even a clue
Purely, chance
Mere, circumstance
Internet connection
Minds' distraction
Thoughts stimulation
Magnetic attraction
Hearts' inspiration
Body sensation
Souls' intuition
Gods' illumination
KNOWING
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Connecting on the net of heart, mind, body and soul experience
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suzystars commented on KNOWING
07-25-2009
- Nice rhyme and there is thought and meaning behind everything we do. Most of the time we don;t realize it. No I should say most of the time we don't take time to realize it. Time is a precious gift we have all been given to use how we see fit. It is what you said that comes from the heart. It is not a gift we can hold on to. We must use it to the best of our ability as we pass thru it. I think you said a lot in this short poem. I got out of it Hearts, bodies, souls, and God are the real love. Words that come from those we cannot see, the Internet, lies and exaggeration is what you'll really get. You have said a lot to me in the two poems I have so far. Keep inspiring the world.
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07/25/2009
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07-18-2009
- You seem to use too much cliche. Short poem. It is to the point, but try to be more original with your work.
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07/18/2009
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