Fallen

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    Fallen
    Fallen by my own words
    by my own way of life
    by my own way of love

    Fallen by the way you look at me
    by the way he hold me
    from the things you told me

    Fallen like a angel with no wings
    like that saint that never wins
    and the sinner who always has a song to sing


    Fallen by the mess i have made
    by the love i regret i gave

    Fallen by the depth of you
    and this world

    Fallen by the twist of now being a woman
    no longer a girl

    Wondering i could ever make my great escape
    I am fallen and i don't know what to do
    Fallen just to fall out of love with you.

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    connsk8 commented on Fallen

    06-19-2009

    I lke the self examination in this and the wisdom you have gained, the insight, but I think you are too hard on your self. Very good read.
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    charliewang commented on Fallen

    03-24-2009

    "Love bears it out to the edge of doom"
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    magati commented on Fallen

    03-23-2009

    seems we complicate our lives by what we do n say...well dont fall to far that u can pick urself up again...nice words of caution
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    Bethane1978 commented on Fallen

    03-22-2009

    Excellent
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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