Falling up

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  • Selfless
    • LukLupe
    • forced and fought for that response and what do you know it was his b-day

    Falling up

     Tears falling at my feet 
    Shadows without light beneath me
    Hide the pain I see 
    But only I can see
    Breath and sample the air 
    That you can't hold on to hear and there
    Oh your filled with the lies that people tell you
    You want them to be true
    Lie to yourself and collect the pain 
    Hold me as I cry for the same
    Insane seems to come forth
    and Love slowly is broken
    "I give out hearts as if it never 
    breaks as if it never beats the 
    same as if it was everlasting but 
    it is not I just gave you the shattered pieces"



    - LuK/Lupe ~Loverly~



    P.S. I think there is a way to fall but fall the right way???

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    wagus commented on Falling up

    06-16-2009

    Poem is well done easy read... but ya need to watch your computer they like to switch out letter change words on us... Line 3 hind/hide -- not sure if error but for me hide works better Line 4 me/I Line 6 hear/here I just luv smart computers.... Oh and I'm not a school teacher just old guy lot time on hands use to hate anything in school English Writing Reading but loved making smoke bombs and cutting up critters... now to old to do that so try to read write... look forward to seeing more from ya
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