Falling

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    Falling

    Determined to walk in the sun's direction
    To catch a ray that can only burn
    and manipulate a pale complexion.
    Closed eyes open slowly
    Throughout conversation
    in the company of the moon.
    Only to close again at daybreak.
    The wish uttered to dancing stars
    For the glimpse of light
    seen but only for a moment.
    The will to rise up
    Arms raised in agony
    Demanding wings.
    Prance in unison
    with the sheep of dreams.
    But only a number.
    Only a number?
    Only a number.
    When was the beginning?
    Unfelt from numbness.
    Ears cloudy with tears
    Hair tickles the spine,
    Looking up to the mountains,
    Pasting feathers on arms unembracing,
    Jumping, soaring, falling to a fresh start.
    Still realizing
    A gravity glitch
    Cannot ease a heavy heart.

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    dahlusion commented on Falling

    05-11-2019

    "Arms raised in agony Demanding wings" –– WOW! I understand and relate, and, "Still realizing A gravity glitch Cannot ease a heavy heart" ––))

    Kanicki commented on Falling

    11-06-2010

    Bravo! What a beautiful and great write! I loved this, it resonated with me. Peace, Love and Light

    SILKYTWEED commented on Falling

    12-09-2009

    (smiling) Keep Trying....Excellent Write....Beautifully done...(Bravo)!!!

    keller commented on Falling

    08-02-2009

    the boundries of humanity will they hold us back for good.I think not.

    federallawman commented on Falling

    04-17-2009

    The words are well place, I close my eyes and see what you see. Very good

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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