Flowers in the Grass
Flowers in the grasssome delicate
some like brass
grow together with weeds
and grass
their color and perfume
awake with
the morning dew.
Which one
are you?
Flowers in the Grass
2 Comments
Poem Commentary
I was mad at my neighbor and it got me to thinking....some delicate
some like brass
grow together with weeds
and grass
their color and perfume
awake with
the morning dew.
Which one
are you?
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Poem Comments
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jtlove commented on Flowers in the Grass
06-04-2010
- I'd rather think life is like a avacado. You have to go through the hard shell and layers to get to the heart. Sounds like who? Sounds like you. Sounds like me! Take the time to peel back the layers and see my heart. I want to share it with you. I just need you to help me tenderly pull back those layers. Thanks.
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06/04/2010
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SuSpence commented on Flowers in the Grass
06-04-2010
- haha this one made me giggle a lil with the question on the end. So clever. I really like this one, for such a short write you packed a lot into this one. I feel I am a lil of both depending on my mood haha. ~Spence
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