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I was recently reunited with an old friend from high school..we've been hanging out and getting to know each other again...he told me that he liked me in high school but was to shy to say anything...he's been there for me thru these trying times and I just wanted to find some way of showing him how it made me felt.


When I was down
You lifted me back up
When a tear I shed
A shoulder u lent
When I need to talk
You sat and Listened
Without Judgement
Your gentle carresses
So much they meant
You are a good friend
So loyal and true
Good friends are hard to find
Mine I hope you always will be
More than friendship
Is what you see
For we not know
What the future holds
Maybe one day it could be
More that friendship
Between you and me
But Honestly
Right now friendship
Is all I have in me

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gogant commented on Friendship


Lovely words from your heart are always there to express the thanks for a friend, indeed. Very nicely put in this poem of yours...............................................................g

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Teesel’s Poems (6)

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Thoughts 1
Given Up 7
Friendship 2
A Poem for my Daughter 2
What Have I Done 3
Life 3