GET WELL GIFT

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    GET WELL GIFT

    A woman’s frail body, once young and strong, struggles to breathe.
    The Soul body learns and grows, burning brighter throughout the years.
    A smile crosses the woman’s knowing face as the soul shines through her tired eyes.

    The son gifts his heart to where his mother lies.
    The Soul cord grows more golden as two souls come together.
    The son sees beyond matter the immense beauty through the heart.

    The mother muffles her words in a heavy breath.
    The son groans his words in a body growing old.
    Two souls laugh in the spirit of God’s bliss, joyous and free.

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    sincere commented on GET WELL GIFT

    05-08-2009

    I think poems are much more meaningfil when they don't rhyme, this is a good example, love it.

    origionalmerlin commented on GET WELL GIFT

    04-22-2009

    ahh the memory hasnt faded of looking up and seeing perfection, from boundless unconditional love,, mother.. i know i do recall it and enjoy walking through places and times long ago from this moment, with my mother...(she just published her first bok of poetry and her first book of photographs through ex-librus... look her up pen name Logan

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on GET WELL GIFT

    04-07-2009

    lol your spelling was a little of in this one.. ROTFL

    Equity commented on GET WELL GIFT

    03-06-2009

    Don't stop writing.

    twilightchick commented on GET WELL GIFT

    03-05-2009

    its so beautiful

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    Kelstorm’s Poems (14)

    Title Comments
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    DIVINE MADNESS 2
    THE GOLDEN HARP 1
    Chapter 5 (continuation
    )
    4
    HOLY FIRE, BURN! 4
    WHERE’S THE SOUND 15
    ETERNITY’S SONG 9
    ODE TO A FRIEND 4
    LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE 8
    SILENCE HERALDS TRUTH 9
    A LOVER’S KISS 11
    THE CHILD AWAKES 12
    GET WELL GIFT 6
    LIVING CYCLE, CYCLES, CYCLES ... 7
    YOUNG OR OLD - - DREAMING CHILD 6