GhostsOf Yesterday

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    GhostsOf Yesterday

    They appear without warning.
    Taking over mind and body.
    Appearing as shadows transparent and light.
    Leaving a feeling of something not right.

    Through the days that there here
    You can bet nothing is clear.
    Forever tormenting the spirit living
    Humanties trials of forgiving.

    Forging forward to your future
    These ghosts withhold nurture
    Never allowing comforts feeling
    Ensures their place unrelenting.

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    lightcourier commented on GhostsOf Yesterday

    07-03-2009

    I liked your message here. Just who are those ghosts! A lot of interpretations here, which i like! Adds a lot of mystique which piques interest! Nice work! Thanks!

    lightcourier commented on GhostsOf Yesterday

    07-03-2009

    One typo "They're" instead of "there" in verse 5. (you can erase this comment!)

    jasmnwod

    07/04/2009

    thank you for the review and for catching my era lol

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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