Gone

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    Poem Commentary

    It's really rough and needs to be smoothed out

    Gone

    What difference does one day really make?
    When you're telling me its all been fake?
    You don't want to pretend
    You just want to go

    How much do your friends really do?
    Your phone rings and thats your cue
    Walk away don't look back
    Dont come home
    Leave me all alone

    Why can't I drag you away?
    You're in the dark where you want to stay
    Angry sad lonely confused
    I'm just a girl
    Nothing to lose

    Held your hand
    Guarded your back
    Wiped your tears
    Cleaned your vomit
    Supported you after too many beers

    Loved you
    Adored you
    Fought with you
    Fought for you

    Given you everything I have
    Same old story
    Same old line
    You're amazing but not enough

    So now you're gone
    What do I do?
    I sit here at home
    And wait for you.

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    cagle64 commented on Gone

    06-23-2009

    Well i can relate 2 this as if it was me. good work cant wait 4 more

    wildpendigus commented on Gone

    06-08-2009

    It's really nice have you ever thought about recording yor lyrics, you are very talented ! Congratulations grecowong@yahoo.com

    DominiqueRenee

    06/08/2009

    Wow thanks for the comment! I never thought about it, I don't really think I'm that good! Lol! But thank you

    reeni316 commented on Gone

    06-05-2009

    wow that is a strong poem i really can relate with that and your feelings and i look for that in my poems. well ty for shairing with all of us .

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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