Hard life to Live

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    Hard life to Live

    For those who know me,they know my cry...
    My life is hard,I know not why....
    The pain ,it flows within my soul...
    My heart beats slow, no room to grow...
    From the passions of caring,to this ice cold stone..
    Within me freezing,for this I moan...
    The pain intense,to say the least...
    What shall I do,to calm the beast..
    That lives within me,raging for escape..
    The prison that holds it,my anger takes shape..
    I'd go insane from the things I endure..
    My life so hard,of this i'm sure..
    But My friends often help me ,when I become lost..
    They show me the way,to pull my heart from the frost..
    That covers my heart,filled with righteousness true...
    If you are a friend,please read this message ,thank you...

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    dora18 commented on Hard life to Live

    06-21-2009

    Fantastic poem...alot of meaning within it. My favorite.

    am2anangel commented on Hard life to Live

    05-26-2009

    i too know the agony of pain not always physical but also emotional. It's always good to have friends to lean on. I enjoyed your poem and your style.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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