Her Dance

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    Her Dance

    Her shadow still dances on this street
    Carefree of all control
    Never stumbling, or missing a beat
    As if music was born into her soul
    She dances light and full of grace
    Unaware of any who are watching
    So many emotions upon her face
    So little care of the miracles happening
    It's a sight to see indeed
    And many come from afar
    None of them caring at all of the speed
    Taking trains, planes, or car
    As long as they reach her before
    She decides to dance no more

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    SavVySam commented on Her Dance

    11-16-2009

    Hi there, I haven't visited in a while and wanted to say hi and take a peak...this is a wonderful work! I love the "carefree of all control!" Stay well..

    wheelsal commented on Her Dance

    08-18-2009

    Another nice work. Keep writing. Sally...........

    kochab commented on Her Dance

    08-10-2009

    wow thats very gracefull. I think you did a good job on it although im not one for the less rhyming poems.

    NayInLove commented on Her Dance

    02-03-2009

    love the imagery!!

    MX commented on Her Dance

    01-04-2009

    I liked "Black and Blue" and "Her Dance" the best of your poems which I read. Keep writing. I like your poems better than the others I've read on this web site so far. I'm a new comer and perhaps and early goer. I've done this for a long time. P

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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