Her Pain...

0 Comments

Tags:
  • Emotional
    • ,
  • Sadness
    • ,
  • Love
    • wats6723
    • so i havent been on here in many years.. i kinda got a writers block..but i think i might be back!!

    Poem Commentary

    I was listening to some song on spotify about a woman who got abused, and this came to my head. Its not much but there's power in this short poem.

    Her Pain...

    When I needed you, you were not there.
    When I cried for you, you did not care.
    You took my heart and crushed it, how could you dare?
    I thought I trusted you, I  thought this was real.
    I guess instead it was just for a thrill.
    Now im broken and running away.
    I hear you yelling to please stay.
    You say you'll change and wont do it again,
    but this is a battle you will not win.
    I tried and tried but couldnt stand it.
    I want to be loved...I demand it!

    Poem Comments

    (0)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    wats6723’s Poems (12)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Her Pain... 0 03/10/2015
    Not a Simple Life 0 10/31/2010
    power of the word 0 07/30/2010
    Piano Excurssion 0 05/15/2009
    True Friend, (because HE is the true friend) 1 05/15/2009
    Love 0 05/15/2009
    Is it You 1 05/15/2009
    This Fire... 0 05/15/2009
    Judgement 0 05/15/2009
    Time Travel 0 05/15/2009
    Lovely Seas 1 05/15/2009
    I Cant Understand 0 05/15/2009
    Top of Page