Hide the Moon

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    Hide the Moon

     Whats done in the dark, can bear no sparks
    Or dreams defend, in a hope for the end
    Savage thoughts of mindless acts
    A battered soul comes under attack
    Nightmares of waking from a sleep of peace
    Hearts are shredded and no sign of ease
    Piece together my broken bones
    Pick me up, and help me home
    What i did in the dark, it left its marks
    And i beg for you never to see them.

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    1LostGypsy commented on Hide the Moon

    10-06-2009

    Another great piece of work! I think we share similar styles. I have a piece like this one as well called Less Is More. You have to check it out please. I am craving your feedback.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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