I Can't Do It Again

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    I Can't Do It Again

     A broken girl,
    Twisted and hopeless on a car seat.
    No-one ever told her this life was not the one -
    Dreaming away the daytime into her darkness and her fun.
    Finding consolation in other peoples prose,
    Managing to see nothing but destruction in her own.
    And you never told me that it couldnt be this way -
    You never even showed me this was not the place I'd stay.
    A twisted girl lies broken on a back seat
    No-where left to run, and i'll finally admit defeat.

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    tonid commented on I Can't Do It Again

    11-27-2009

    Dear Bambi, this poem really touched my heart...I felt the hopelessness in this poem and the despair...very simple, but, powerful,,,thank you for sharing,,,tonid
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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