Hip Hop Poem

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    Hip Hop Poem

     
    In my sight I see tonight the future of my dream,
    It flew down upon my hometown in a star lit silver stream,
    creped into my head, my heart and soul, became possessed,
    A cold chill spread from my mind and shot out through my flesh,
    hands began to shake, the quake could break the earth in two,
    the tremble made a beat,
    the beat was one I never knew,
    I paced and raced around my place in search of pen pad,
    looked around until I found the only one I had,
    And as my hand was shaking the chills were spreading, far from the
    abnormal norm,
    the pen hit the pad in such a way that words would form,
    and in these words I began to regain my conscious mind,
    spread across the page were suttle thoughts composed in complex
    rhyme,
    The mos def lyricist lounged in common sense, driven to bust rhymes
    an write lines, proving skills evidence, supernatural style and black
    thought came over me, immortal techniques proved why tonight I run
    DMC,
    Backed up for a second wipe my irritating itching eye,
    there was something in it dogg I swear I never cry,
    Like doves in love when flying through purple rain,
    I stepped back up to my pad and started to write again,
    Of an outcast who would Cee Lo with rhymes more colorful than an
    eminem,
    step on a stage against any man and always rakim,
    Be like Naz son who you think you is 2 Pac or biggie
    phareal my skill will cause a fiasco and rockafella quickly,
    a college dropout going through d tox spilling blood for the game,
    determined to get rich or die tryin just so you remember his name,
    Pain then came over me in my sleeping sanctuary,
    the thought of written battles fought leading to obituary,
    Not me no I choose a different rout,
    The wolf in sheep's clothing who's truth was figured out,
    The beast who chose to stay the beast amongst fame and fortunes
    beautiful eye,
    remain the man who only watched cribs and wished x would pimp his
    ride
    while I rhyme of ancient times and what dream I have found,
    I elevate the mind of mine and many underground,
    destined and determined to be the ancient mind of now
     

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    Niecy commented on Hip Hop Poem

    12-18-2009

    MUSIC AND SOUND REBOUNDS, HIP- HOP SEA MET LAKE OF CALM, POOLED YOU STILL JUST TO REVEAL "YO RHYME OF ANCIENT TIMES IS DESTINED TO BE THE ANCIENT MIND OF NOW!" SO TELL IT, MATTER OF FACT YELL IT! AN ARTIST CREATING ART!

    Silent1

    12/21/2009

    Thank you Niecy for all your kind words. Honestly it's people like you who make writing worth it. Through my words I inspired you to write these comments. Through these comments you have inspired me to keep going.

    lightbeing commented on Hip Hop Poem

    12-05-2009

    ABSOLUTELY BEATIFIC! GO HEAD BROTHER I FEEL YOU THINK GOD, SOME REAL SKILLS HAVE COME TO LIGHT! NOW THAT'S "FLOWING," YOU GOT IT! ME? I HAVE CREATED A CEREBRAL FLOW THAT EXCHANGES FREQUENCIES & VIBRATIONAL THOUGHT ON THE "MIND WARRIOR" PLANE WHEN YOU CAN CHECK ME OUT I'M "LIGHTBEING' MY MIND IS ACCELERATED SO I DON'T SOUND LIKE ANY POET THAT'S EVER WRITTEN, JUST LIKE THE START OF HIP-HOP SOME BODY HAD TO CREATE A "NEW" WAY HOPE IT'S ME, ANYWAY GIVE ME A LOOK SEE AND I THINK YOU'LL GET IT BECAUSE YOU TRULY "CREATING"!!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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