Artistic View

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    Artistic View

    Freehand touch, mind makes up the picture visualize/
    Drawn to canvas like a moth to light mesmerize/
    Pencil in the pieces missing making the picture clear/
    erase the traces of lines no longer wanted there/
    hands speak for vocals when voices can't be heard/
    Eyes act as ears soaking in unspoken words/
    Graphics break away falling from the easel stand/
    Three D images escaping imagination land/
    Freeze, chill out to calm the high degrees/
    wipe away the sweat and don't forget to breathe/
    Breathe, let oxygen in and lungs fill/
    Don't fear the expression, This art shit is real/
    Real, Life put down in different forms/
    Slowly breaking away at the stereotype of norm/
    We are forced to face this blank wall/
    Some accept the colorless while others choose to draw/
    Draw/

    Freestyle sound, slow down the thoughts that circulate through the mind/
    Arrange each word so that it fits into a rhythmic line/
    Motion the hands cast a spell to leave crowds hypnotized/
    If in battle then render opponents paralyzed/
    Imagination takes over intensifying skill/
    Extreme focus falling deeper into the sypher still/
    Finding the minds at a higher state than when at the start/
    True words spoken from the core of a poets hart/
    Freeze, chill out to calm the high degrees/
    wipe away the sweat and don't forget to breathe/
    Breathe, let oxygen in and lungs fill/
    Don't fear the expression, This art shit is real/
    Real, Life put down in different forms/
    Slowly breaking away at the stereotype of norm/
    We are forced to face this blank wall/
    Some accept the colorless while others choose to draw/
    Draw/

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    gjmichele77 commented on Artistic View

    05-11-2009

    Only an artist could have written that! Excellent rhyme and meter. I could feel your soul. michele

    Niecy commented on Artistic View

    04-02-2009

    Felt the vibe & Loved your flow! The canvass of your Artist Obscure but Real, Sooo many colors! Good write.

    orsonav commented on Artistic View

    03-21-2009

    This is a very good work.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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