Hmmmm

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    Hmmmm
    Hmmm
    People care
    People Stare
    Why dare compare yourself to me?
    Just agree
    You cost a fortune,and I well....
    Im free
    To be me
    See,we both long to be held
    Yet be free
    To speak
    to freak
    If the need be.....
    Just breath and enjoy dont be coy
    Or exploit
    Just wish you were me
    Martie J Recor

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    dangedmanjr commented on Hmmmm

    03-30-2009

    very nice...almost as concieted a view as me!
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    WordSlinger commented on Hmmmm

    03-25-2009

    the need be..... Great attitude, nice (10)
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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