HOT DAY

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    ONE NIGHT IT JUST CAME TO ME

    HOT DAY

    HOT DAY

     

     

    As I start to reminisce on this hot day how we used to sweat,

    Now I miss when u were the one I used to undress,

    I don’t take my time like I did my first time,

    I don’t close my eyes because I don’t have any more feelings inside,

    All u see is a grown man cry,

    When he knows you’re not mine,

    He goes back to an empty life full of lies,

    Because he knew he had a wife,

    Without love he should continue his life until he dies.

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    lcole commented on HOT DAY

    06-02-2009

    this is deep, and very very heart felt and I know a situation simular to what your speaking of and that person feels the same way. REAL TALK

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    3N37JV’s Poems (37)

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