Humming the Song

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Humming the Song
    Humming the song as I walk home,
    How beautiful... is loving you
    The melody goes through my body,
    Contaminating every inch of it,
    Poisoning my mind with it
    Its beauty is captivating
    You know this song love, don’t you?
    You wrote the notes!
    The music amuse me – it’s YOU
    The euphony of your heart in a roundabout

    Humming the song as I get home,
    It seems to be stuck in my head for a while now...
    Indescribable how I’m loving the flow
    Tone by tone
    Every allegro, adante, every turn and every go
    I tried to sing it but soon realized
    This song has no words
    Let’s be quiet and still, just listen

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    vickijane commented on Humming the Song

    10-17-2009

    Very nicely done love I especially liked the ending Let's be quiet and still, just listen.... Vickijane
    Reply to Comment

    sk commented on Humming the Song

    03-04-2009

    I like this...
    Reply to Comment

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    lovebastard’s Poems (7)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    The Ring 3 12/12/2012
    Keep the Hustle 3 04/27/2009
    Tinge of your love 2 04/24/2009
    Through Your Veins 4 03/23/2009
    Craving 3 03/05/2009
    Humming the Song 3 03/03/2009
    Lines of her lies 2 02/25/2009
    Top of Page